
Photo by Sam McMillan
Feathers in the Soul
John Solensten
My Iranian neighbors sometimes speak of the Sohbet, the mystical conversation that
occurs, quite suddenly sometimes, when an “openhearted” person becomes involved in
exploring the mystery of “a spiritual presence in the physical and natural world.”
In his search for an elusive something in the natural world in rural Minnesota, in that early November in 1941, my father hunted—hunted in his own way—his own eccentric way—yes, hunted and swept me, his son, with him into whiteness and wings.
He announced his intention to hunt that Sunday morning the same way he announced that it was time to go to church. He simply said, “It is time. Dress to hunt. Today we seek the last of the snow geese.”
He dressed for the occasion as he dressed for church: wool jacket from one worn suit, trousers from another. A frayed tie flapped like a dark tongue at the white shirt, boots and a heavy coat, an ancient Norwegian army thing with hood.
It embarrassed me when he wore those clothes in town: they spoke of our family poverty.
I knew how the hunt would go. Always he hunted late migrating snow geese, hunted (I with him) standing among bare cottonwood and elm trees on a tall crest on the river waiting for birds to pass overhead, his 1907 hammer shotgun leaned against a tree trunk.
Pass shooting, he called it.
That hunt—that Sabbath hunt—began as heavy snow descended on the land, defining in wind and drift the end of autumn days, the beginning of winter in the fields and in the wide river lands.
Yes, and in my persisting memory of it we are hunting.
We stand together as we stand together in the oak pews in church waiting for gospel or epistle. No attempt at concealment, no blind, no camouflage.
He is silent.
He turns to me and yells into the wind, “In the owl-light in the fallen snow you can see after darkfall. The snow does not silence or blind!”
I nod at him and he is silent again.
He has been silent most of the time recently. He sat bent over into his space in the passenger side of the car as we drove toward the river. “I have a cancer,” he had advised me a week or so earlier. “I am becoming acquainted with pain,” he had said to me.
He has not spoken of treatment or cure.
The farmer-landowner—seeing my father’s strange hunting apparel as we were asking his permission to hunt—laughed and called out to him:”Goin’ to church, Martin?”
He did not reply.
The geese are resting out on the wide reaches of the dark river water.
He stands in front of me, his face toward them, watching them as I step sideways and watch them myself:
Snow Geese Rafting On the River
I cannot quite see their eyes
but only mask thin
apostrophes of eyes
that tell me
they are out of hunter range.
Now in my chill,
in my snow beat restlessness
I watch the great raft of them
ride on water
bulged in swollen tides
by the brute north wind
and see
they do not move.
And I know
they keep their great white host
steady, steady–far out–safe–
holding together
with the steady paddling
of their webbed black web feet–
until–at some voice I cannot hear–
they rise
with tumultuous choric yelping
into the tall gray towers
of migratory wind
and are gone.
but only mask thin
apostrophes of eyes
that tell me
they are out of hunter range.
Now in my chill,
in my snow beat restlessness
I watch the great raft of them
ride on water
bulged in swollen tides
by the brute north wind
and see
they do not move.
And I know
they keep their great white host
steady, steady–far out–safe–
holding together
with the steady paddling
of their webbed black web feet–
until–at some voice I cannot hear–
they rise
with tumultuous choric yelping
into the tall gray towers
of migratory wind
and are gone.
Yes, they rise from the water—yelping and wheeling in great circles—and slide off with the wind. In that moment the water, the sky, seem empty in a final way. The tall grass on the shore bends down, submitting to the wind. The blank water speaks of brute ice. No use to look up into the sky. The flight is done, wings gone. The land and water and sky say, “Time for silence in the snowy fields and stone hard earth and winter sleep and winter dreams.”
My father nods at me, turns to look northwest over the long reach of the river and yells, “Time to go!”
I object—as usual—and ask,” Isn’t there something yet?”
“Not here!” he replies, his face grim, grim as we walk toward the car.
We have forgotten the guns. I hurry to retrieve them.
So we begin the drive home, slamming into drifts already forming on the roads, bucking them, bucking them. I am worried. I remember those hunters who died in the Great Blizzard in November of 1940. I remember the terror, the chill seeing their grotesque, interlocked figures lying in the straw in the horse sleds and farm wagons that carried them past me through the town.
I looked for their eyes and could not find them.
As we drive toward the town I am also worried because I can feel the surges of his pain in his sudden bending forward in his passenger car seat.
He pulls himself up and is looking upward through the car windshield.
I am struggling to see the road through the white fury of snow.
Suddenly he cries, “Stop, please!”opens his door, steps out.
And then he is stumbling down the ditch toward the whirling white world out in the oat stubble.
The engine of the car is running, the lights and hand brake on. When I step out of the car, the wind whips my face, stinging it, telling me to go back.
I walk up behind him there where he stands near the fence beyond the ditch.
He is looking upward into the sky where there are quick blue openings in the heavy clouds. Ah, yes. There above us long strings of snow geese are climbing the tall wind towers. I can barely hear their voices in the wind. They are perhaps five hundred feet up. They are vague phantoms, their wings beating, beating steadily to hold course.
What does he want from them?
Suddenly a ray of sun light flares on their wings.
Holds for just a moment.
He stands looking into the madness of the whirling snow as the geese slide downwind and out of sight.
“We have to get back!” I cry at him.
Him, a dark figure in a coat, his shoulders lifted, his face held upward into the beat of the snow.
Him, this father-stranger.
The turning blue window in the gray sky closes.
He turns, climbs the ditch toward the car.
He sits in the car, a tear of snow at his glasses, his nose beaked red with the cold. He is wearing a brief fool’s smile on his face.
“Behold a host arrayed in white!” he cries.
“What?”
“Arrayed in white!”
Damn! I want to reply, but….
We drive slowly, silently townward.
He sits stiffly upright, looking straight ahead of the car as it beats through flaring drifts toward the town.
At home my mother makes me hot chocolate; she does not ask him if he wants some, whispers his name just once as he stands before her: “Martin!”
He turns to his chair and books, keeps his silence, his pain.
But I know we are not done with the day: life with birds does not pose and hold on a human schedule.
The snow seems to be lifting off the streets in the town.
NOCTURNE
As darkness falls, crows—sweeping up and over the town from sheds of trees on the river—tear the town sky briefly with hooked black wings and harsh voices.
I feel something there in the counterpoint of their blackness, something else that resists my human presence, my human knowing.
Something that moves wings, feathers in the soul.
9 comments
Kaye Foster says:
Oct 11, 2018
I read this and could feel the cold wind and felt sadness. I kept on reading through it, and sometimes I don’t do that. John, what a talent you have. Sending love–Kaye
Peter Mladinic says:
Aug 21, 2018
I very much like the inserted poem, “Snow Geese Rafting On the River.” The blend of natural and spiritual is both felt and heard. I sense the extraordinary in the ordinary, the commonplace transformed by memory and language.
Karen Wolf says:
Aug 18, 2018
I thought this was beautiful and affecting. The images will stay with me for a long time. And I appreciate that “no animals were harmed” in the making of this essay!
Carmen Herzog says:
Aug 11, 2018
What a wonderful description of a father and son spent walking through the field.
I could sense the emotions of that walk as if I were there myself. Beautifully written.
Brenda Daly says:
Aug 7, 2018
As I read “Feathers in the Snow,” I feel the beating of “something” deeply felt, a spiritual presence.
Delores Roeder says:
Aug 7, 2018
I really enjoyed the clarity of the scenes — hunters in the heavy snow – snow geese on the lake and raising all together into the sky – and driving in the snow. And then the contrasting crows — scenes we are all likely familiar with but unable to describe so beautifully.
Brenda Daly says:
Aug 7, 2018
I feel the beating of “something” deeply felt, a spiritual presence, in “Feathers in the Snow.” A son’s love for his dying father merges with a larger mystery of earth and sky, snow and birds.
Carole Kazmierski says:
Aug 6, 2018
So many wonderful images in this poignant essay. Much goes unspoken between the father and son, yet the son is perceptive enough to grasp what the father is dealing with and what he is seeking. As another non-Lutheran, I don’t know the hymn “Behold a Host Arrayed in White,” but I do see other spiritual connections and wonder about a link to Emily Dickinson’s “Hope is the thing with feathers.”
Barb Gilliand says:
Aug 6, 2018
I was moved by this portrait of the stoic, taciturn father in this essay. Even for me, a non-Lutheran unfamiliar with the hymn, “Behold a Host Arrayed in White,” the scene is impactful.